Route 66 is such an American icon I had to do this one in an American voice. All I know of that is what I’ve heard in films and cowboy serials. I hope it comes across OK and that y’all be kind to me.
PHOTO PROMPT © Jean L. Hays
“This a trading post?”
“Says so on the sign, don’ it?”
“Got some racoon skins.”
“Hell, everyone’s got raccoon skins. Can’t do ya much on them.”
“I need t’eat. I put a whole heap o’work into catchin’ ‘em.”
The trader ignored the trapper’s desperate eyes. “Anything else?”
“Mebbe beaver.”
“They’re good. How many ya got?”
The trapper grinned excitedly. “Two dozen. What’ll ya give?”
“The angry end o’ this Winchester, my friend.”
Throwing a layer of dirt into the pit, the trader chuckled down at the body.
“Two dozen beaver, a horse, a half-decent saddle. A satisfactory day’s trading, indeed.”
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
And the raccoon skins, don’t forget about the raccoon skins!
Clever trick, find out if someone’s worth robbing before blowing them away and nicking their stuff 🙂
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Haha. It’s funny you should say that because I noticed I’d neglected the raccoons when I was writing about it but the damn critters take up too many words and I had none left.
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Great voice and story. I bet a similar story happened in the distant past on a few occasions at these remote outposts. Good work.
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Thanks, glad the voice worked for you
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Dear Michael,
Now I ain’t no expert but I’d say y’all got that lingo down pretty good. I have some British and Irish characters in my books so I have the challenge on the other side of it. And the story…well, good stuff. Kinda darkish…but good.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle, it’s always tricky trying to write in an accent that isn’t your own for fear of going all Dick Van Dyke in Mary Poppins.
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I think ya’all got the lingo down pat… Gots to be careful who ya deals with…Not all be honest folk out there
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Thanks Dale. I’m sure some hideous things happened/happen in deserted places where there’s no one to see or ask questions.
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I’m sure you’re right!
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Downright mean, ornery crittur, that trading post man.
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Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed
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What a grim transaction! As an American, I enjoyed the story, haha!
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Thanks Emily, glad it worked for you
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Ouch… we do share the evil trade post dealer… like your language, though I’m a Swede so I guess I’m fine with most anything (bad judge really)
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Bad judge or not, I’ll take the compliment wherever it comes from. Thanks Bjorn
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Yikes! Don’t trade with that guy – ever!!!
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No, just keep right away. Thanks for commenting
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Being English as well, I can only go by what I’ve heard in films,TV programmes etc, but it sounds authentic to me! Poor old trapper, all he wanted was t’eat!
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Yes, I think maybe he was too hungry to be wary
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This must have happened all the time, people doing each other over and everywhere being so isolated, you could get away with it too. Nice tale, Michael and great dialogue 🙂
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I’m sure this kind of highway robbery would have been quite common in isolated parts. Dog eat dog.
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Very true. Not pleasant times to live through 🙂
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poor fellow for getting the bad side of the bargain. 😦
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Yep, some people just don’t git no luck!
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Aw, how mean. The guy, not the story, which was good, such a twist. 😀 I wonder how long he stays in business.
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I suppose he’s alright until law and order arrive at his outpost
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That’s a lot of beaver. I bet this guy doesn’t get too much repeat business.
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Yeah, he doesn’t exactly encourage his customers to come back again.
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You convinced me!
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Thanks Dawn
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I hope that someone turns the tables on this trader.
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There’s always someone bigger and cleverer than you. I’m sure he’ll meet his match someday.
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Everyone for hisself…or something like that. Great voice,Michael. I enjoyed it. This makes me glad we have coins now. 🙂
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Thanks Amy
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