PHOTO PROMPT © Ted Strutz
Life had been going nowhere, which it will if not led. Work brought rewards, but then more work on top, the only respite, the every night monotony of the pub. Davy wondered how he hadn’t noticed the insidious dull routine invade, until it possessed him.
He pulled a large coat and a rucksack from his car before locking it and posting the keys to his company with a note.
The ferry’s loading doors gaped a welcome as he made his way round to the foot passenger entrance. He didn’t know where he was going except this time, it wasn’t nowhere.
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
I wish I knew whether he was escaping or having a mid-life crisis. Well written, Michael
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Probably a bit of both if truth were told
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Love the end of this… a purpose in itself is somewhere.
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Thanks Bjorn. It’s quite a romantic notion to just take off to find adventure
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I liked the endless possibilities he seemed to invite at the end.
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Thank-you, I think he could be wandering all the way to India just soaking up new experiences each day
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Is it wandering, or flight? Nice one
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Thank you, sorry for the late reply, your comment crept under my radar
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Good job of summing up life in the business world ~ the great ‘Sit and Spin’ experience. 🙂
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Thanks for the comment. Business life is like that, I agree. Work and the more work expanded into you’re free time until the quality of life has gone and been replaced by stress
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Why all cell phones should be banned. We could all do with a bit of stepping backwards to when the phrase “leave work at work” really meant just that.
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Exactly, in the longer version he drops his mobile in the channel once the ferry sets sail, because he doesn’t want any more calls or to be found
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Dear Michael,
In the background I hear George Harrison singing, “If you don’t know where you’re going, any road will take you there.” Love the open endedness of this story. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Ha ha, Rochelle, I think if we had your music and my music in the same room we’d have two of everything. Although the title of this comes from a Manfred man’s Earth Band song. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UIkAX2bIzGI I think the sentiment is better expressed by George’s track.
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Michael, this is beautifully written and I particularly loved the last line.
I think so many of us would relate to your character, at least from time to time.
There have been a few times parenting young kids where the lure of jumping on a something and disappearing has been so tempting. I usually take advantage of medical appointments in the city to “disappear”. It’s great fun. No doubt, much of this fun is because I do have love and family to come home to, but you do need some time to yourself too.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Just how I feel, it is a romantic notion that it would be good to just wander out into the world but you need something to come back to when it gets cold and lonely.
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So true. Bring it on.
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Easy to spend years drifting along in a life that might not suit you – tough to break out. Glad your character did. Great tale Michael
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Thanks Lynn. I think a lot of people would like to break out, but commitments and fear tie them down.
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The moment of realisation when you realise your life has reached that point of mid-life routine is familiar to everyone – what you do when reaching there is the key! Nicely done.
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Thanks Iain, you’re right and I think it’s easier for writers because we can go there without having to leave home.
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I wish you’d been sitting next to me when I read that last line. You would have heard, “Oh! Oh! OH! I love it!”
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Lovely comment Alicia, thanks so much. Getting a reaction of any sort is good, but that is fantastic, really makes my chest swell. 🙂
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Well done Davy, well done Michael, I liked the posting of the keys, it made the story real.
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Thanks Michael, I like that too. I’ve thought if you did want to disappear you should do it with consideration of doing the right thing as much as possible. Sending the keys of his company car back is the right thing to do.
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I absolutely love this!
Kudos to him for just leaving when it was time.
I wish him the best… and wish I had the cohonas to do the same…
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Thanks Dale. I’d like to think one day I could just take off but it’s a romantic notion, reality, ties and responsibilities will always stop me
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Same here…
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“Where are we going”
“We’ll know when we get there.”
Of course, story construction doesn’t necessarily work that way, but getting there is all the fun.
Great story, Mike, as usual!
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Thanks, it doesn’t always work that way but sometimes I arrive at an end and think, “oh, so that’s what it was all about.” It’s a weird sensation ,it’s like some else has written the piece and shown me why things happened and how they turn out
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Well, you know, it can be that way. For instance, I jumped rope backwards when I was a kid because it was easier. I find I write terrific scenes, but not terrific story structure.
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I find that, scene will present itself, then another, it’s linking them all up that’s the problem. (And the tedious part.)
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I really like the way the title sums up the character. He’s on the road again. He lost his sense of direction somewhere along the way but now he’s got himself together and is back on track. Great story!
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Thank you. Yes, I think it’s taken him a while but he’s realised he’s wasting way his time and needs to do something about it, now.
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Yay for Davy 🙂
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Thanks, Yay, indeed.
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Loved the feel of this piece. There was a hopelessness that your last line erased beautifully.
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Thanks, he’s lucky to be able to do it though
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Beautiful final sentence, Michael. It truly made the story.
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Thank-you, pleased you enjoyed it
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Well done, Michael. I like that he’s off on an adventure.
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Thanks, I’m quite envious of him. I’d like to give it all up to write. Preferably somewhere warm
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This is the kind of journey I would like to take…a journey without destination
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Thank you, I’d like to take that journey, unfortunately at the moment I’ve too many commitments, haven’t most of us?
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he’ll probably get lost which isn’t totally bad as it leads to finding one’s self. i’m sure he’ll do fine.
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Can you be lost if you haven’t a destination in mind, though. Wherever he finds himself, that’s where he’s supposed to be, I think. 🙂
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Nice. Just leave the monotony behind and anything is possible.
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It is if you can do it. He’s fortunate in that respect
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Dear Michael,
You leave us with a desire to see what lies ahead for this character. A well crafted story drawing the reader in and desiring more.
Isadora 😎
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Thanks Isadora, I think anything could happen, he could end up anywhere, wandering across continents
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Time to shake off the dust and see the world. Loved it. :o)
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Thanks
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Well done and intriguing story. I wish him well but he could end up right back at the beginning of the story with his life going down the road to nowhere if it’s not directed.
I remember Gord Lightfoot singing “Freedom’s just another word for nothing left to lose.”
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I like that Gordon Lightfoot quote, that nails it very well. Thanks for your comment
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This is a good story. I felt the sense of freedom and excitement he would have boarding the boat.
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Thanks Ted, your comments are much appreciated
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Liked the fact that he finally decided not to live by default.
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Yes, he got up out of his rut, hopefully it’ll work out
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A new start. How often have I thought about doing that? I wish him well.
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Thanks Keith, I also wish him well and wish it was me sometimes
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I think happiness is when we quit chasing and just be. Loved your open ended last lines as well.
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Thanks Neel, he’s off to see what he finds
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One of your best. It resonates with all of us at one time or another.
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Thanks, it’s proving one of my most popular.
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Very deep.
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Thanks Dawn
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Such a clever, and true, opening line. I feel you wrote us into that overloaded normality before Davy takes off – the escape a weight being lifted.
Love the title too – am humming the tune now, and probably will be all week.
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Thank-you, that’s high praise indeed. The song is one of my favourites.
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I would love to be able to do that! Not tell anyone, just go and see where life takes you. What an adventure and a relief to break free of work responsibilities.
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It would be the ultimate adventure for me, not knowing what’s round the corner, just that everyday will be exciting and show something new, thanks Clare
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Michael, You write a wonderful story! It would be so very interesting if we could just take off and do this! Nan
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Thank-you, pleased you liked it. It would be fantastic, if we could take off like this,there’s so much of the world to see and understand, no to days should be the same
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You have voiced the latent wishes of so many , so wonderfully .
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Thank-you, it’s very nice of you to say so
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You capture the emotions well here. I love the “anywhere but here” ending
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Thank-you, I’m pleased you liked it
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“I don’t know where I’m going, but I sure know where I’ve been…”
Great work, sir!
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Thank you, kind of you to say so
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I hope no one is depending on him. If not, I hope he succeeds at something worthwhile. Good writing, Michael. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks, Suzanne. You’re right, very few could just take off because of responsibilities and dependants. He’s lucky in that respect.
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