Thank-you for all the support I’ve had from Friday Fictioneers so far for my debut novel. I’m looking forward to the launch date December 1st and the subsequent reviews. This week’s 100 words is a short excerpt because the prompt fitted so well. I hope you enjoy.
PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson
The air was full of the scent of new shoots and woodland flowers. We crested a rise over which there was a steep drop to a clearing through which ran a wide stream, tinkling over rocks and gravel. A kingfisher perched on a wayward branch hanging over the water and alarmed rabbits scurried away, white scuts bobbing through the green before disappearing into an extensive warren. After the mad race from Claretree, the sense of peace and wholesomeness was palpable. “Where are we?” I asked Wordsworth.
“If you were me, you’d probably call it home, I’m reluctant to call it my place.”
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
Pre-order is in Michael, looking forward to reading more 🙂
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Thanks Iain, in case you didn’t know Laurie Bell and Dawn commented on my piece last week saying they’d ordered A Justified State. I put my review up on Amazon expecting it to say there were now three reviews up, as there were two before, but it only seems to show mine now. I don’t know if I have posted in the right space or if I need to copy to somewhere else?
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It sounds an idyllic place!
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Cheers Draliman, it is supposed to be, for him at least.
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Scut is a new word on me. Thank you
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Thanks Neil, I hope it’s a real word because it’s in the book now. 😊
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Whatever they are called, his surroundings are idyllic.
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Thanks Jilly
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You’ve painted a lovely picture here. Good luck with your book (love the title).
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks Susan
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Lovely portrayal. Definitely, a place I want to visit. Best of luck on your book.
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Thanks Jo
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Picture of this location was clearly painted. Sounds soothing.
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Thanks, it is supposed to be which makes it all the more upsetting when danger and violence arrive
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I’m waiting (im)patiently – more so now!!
Can’t wait for the rest of the story, now.
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Cheers Dale, hopefully it’ll live up to your expectations
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Walking with Wordsworth and his friends, what an experience that would be.
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It certainly would, thanks Michael
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Lovely description of an idyllic setting. The rest of the book is incredibly well-written. The plot is fast-paced with some very amusing scenes, particularly with Lydia. It’s hard to decide who is my favourite character, but she is brilliant! For anyone wondering whether to buy ‘From the Edge of an English Summer’ I can highly recommend it!
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Thanks for the vote of confidence Clare, glad you liked it
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There is full review on my site. Please re-blog it if you would like to.
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An appetising taster. Good luck with the book release.
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Thanks Sandra
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You create the pastoral scene so vividly, felt I was there. Wordsworth’s conversation at the end brought an extra focus to the scene. Good writing. Pre-order of your book is in. Look forward to reading it.
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Thank you very much, I hope you enjoy it and look forward to hearing your thoughts, Mick
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Wonderful descriptions… everything feels so vivid.
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Thanks
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You painted the scene vividly, I certainly imagined being there. Best wishes on your debut novel, very exciting.
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Thank you
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Dear Michael,
Such a well described scene and a great teaser for the rest of the book. All the best on it.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle
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I love this, for a poet there is always a home like this… good luck with the book
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Ahhhh wordy and lovely! 🙂 I could hear it and enjoy the peace
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Thanks Laurie
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I could smell those shoots and flowers! Good luck with the launch.
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Thanks Liz
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You’ve described a paradise. I could clearly picture it as I read.
And yes, “scut” is a real word 🙂
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Thanks Granonine. I knew it was a word because it’s one of my favourites, it fits perfectly what it describes
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Beautifully described!
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Thanks Dawn
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Wonderful descriptions here, brings the place to life. Good luck with the book release.
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Thank you
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