This excellent prompt reminded me of an App I have called ‘Birds of Britain,’ which plays bird songs to help identify them in the field. There are others available and undoubtedly American versions. As a lot of us are restricted to our homes, I thought I might let you know there’s a lot of enjoyment to be had playing this app full blast in the garden and watching the birds it attracts. Springtime is obviously the best time, when territories are being fought over and mates sought. Some of them come quite close, especially the Chaffinches and Robins, who take very strongly against intruders to their territory. (They won’t actually fight your phone or I-pad but will shout at it.) It often brings into the open birds, which would be otherwise hard to spot. I hope you get lucky, if you try this.
Now for this week’s entry:
PHOTO PROMPT © Douglas M. MacIlroy
He checked the phone connection constantly now. It was madness but he couldn’t bring himself to do anything else. He neither ate nor slept.
‘No news is good news,’ they say but no news mauls the nerves; No news twists and blackens the imagination. No news is Hell.
A small bird had taken to joining him at the window, filling the void with its honeyed song. He loved that bird. He loved its trust and sympathy.
But he didn’t want sweet cadences now, he craved the harsh, mechanical shrill of the phone.
A tear fell; ‘no news.’ She wasn’t coming home.
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
A good story about dealing with uncertainty, something we’re all learning to do
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Thanks, Neil
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News is always all or nothing, trying to find the right balance is difficult. Good story Michael. I like the sound of the birdsong app. Might give that a go!
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Do give it a go, it can be very rewarding. It mostly attracts males, although I did pull a rather saucy female blackcap once. There are those that don’t approach but return the call so you can identify what’s around you, the tree pipits did this. Start with common birds and work your way through the species. Don’t bother with Puffins, if you’re not out in the Atlantic on a rocky scottish island.
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This one hits you at the end. An effective write.
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Thank you, Anthony
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Dear Michael,
There’s nothing worse than waiting for a particular someone to call and it never happening. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle
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That birdsong app sounds wonderful.
As for this poor guy, nothing worse than waiting for a phone that won’t ring.
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The App is great fun, Dale. You’d need one for your particular region of Canada but you should enjoy it and they are not expensive. Thanks.
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Such a sad story, I could feel him as he began to accept that the phone was not going to ring.
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Thanks for the comment Draliman, glad you liked it
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Such a sad story beautifully told.
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Thanks, Clare
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Sad, heart bleeds in these situations. Well written.
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Thank you, Susan
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Just sitting by the phone, but no one’s calling. I think that’s a country song. Great take on the prompt!
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Thanks, Russell
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Such a sad story. I hope she changes her mind and returns to him.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks, Susan but I doubt she will
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That’s an excellent story, Michael. It’s elegant and effective, and beautifully constructed.
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Thank you very much, Penny
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A masterful depiction of the gnawing ache we feel when we miss someone, and the futility of sympathy offered by others.
Chapeau
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Thank you, indeed.
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Interesting; as a boy I would sit quietly and observe many of the birds in the garden or in the hedge along the filed. There was a great variety then, nowadays I only ever see and hear Sparrows, blackbirds and robins. Where have all the finch family gone?
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Whereabouts are you? You could try the App, it should draw in any chaffinches that are near. They’re feisty
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You really convey the anguish of the tormented man. Hovering over you phone obsessively is so recognizable, that precious thread of contact to others. And the personal loss of his partner as well ?
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Thank you for your lovely comment, I’m glad you liked it
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You really captured the anguish he must have been feeling. So well done.
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Thanks Patrick
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I know the frustration of waiting for my phone to spring to life. I sense there’s more going on here than a jilted lover, though.
That’s sounds like a pretty cool app. I couldn’t use it if I wanted, though. We get enough birds around here. Every one drives the dogs crazy.
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Oh yeah, fortunately ours doesn’t mind the birds, it’s the squirrels that are the problem
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One of my far off elderly friends is in hospital with the virus. I have so been missing the twice weekly phone calls we had put in place when the lockdown came in…. No one from his family can visit him It is a terrible situation. I was pleased to read your story,
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Thank you Mike, I hope your friends come through OK. It’s a horrible situation
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The agony of waiting… We’ve all been there.
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I think we have, thanks for your comment
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Silence when you are waiting for a message is so painful…
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It is Bjorn, thanks for your comment
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Heartbreaking this.
No news weighs far more heavily on the mind.
FYI I can’t stop picturing the birds shouting at the iPad !
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Yes, they get confused when they can’t find a bird, the noise is coming from, but they’re feisty little things and really give you what for, when they’re angry. Chaffinches are the stroppiest.
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🤣🤣
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When you’re waiting for that kind of news, whatever the reason she isn’t coming home, there is a vast vacuum in no-news. Good story.
Will have to look for that app and try it out
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Thanks. The App helps you learn some of the songs if nothing else but when it attracts birds out into the open it’s great fun. There are several versions.
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That uncertainty is such a killer. A dreadful, gnawing that stops you from doing anything else. Well written, Michael and thanks for the heads up on the app
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Thanks Lynn, glad you liked it and good luck with the app
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A sharp, small portrait of loneliness. Well done.
I’m new to this area and not being able to identify the bird calls bugs me, so I’ll look up that app, thanks.
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You built the sadness layer by layer. Very well done.
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