Hi all, I’m pleased to announce, my latest book, Outsiders, is now available for Kindle pre-order from Amazon.
Due to the coronavirus lockdown the paperback proofs haven’t arrived yet, so whilst a physical copy can be ordered immediately, I’m asking people to hold off until I’ve had a chance to make sure the formatting etc is correct.
Now, onto today’s prompt, an old fridge.
PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
“We can’t just dump it here.”
“Why not, the tip’s closed, what else are we supposed to do?”
“Keep it until the tip opens.”
“But that’s not until tomorrow.”
“Hardly the longest wait you’ll ever have.”
“But I like to get things done.”
“Can’t you see how selfish that is? You’re despoiling the countryside and it’s a danger to children and wildlife.”
“How’s it a danger to children?”
“They might climb in and suffocate.”
“Huh, you don’t need to be Houdini to escape that.”
“OK, show me.”
George smiled as he let the muffled cries subside before freeing his gasping friend.
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
DIY Private Investigation is not for the fainthearted. What could the inhabitants of a rural Essex village possibly know about hunting down and defeating a violent drugs gang?
Where do you start? Why would you even contemplate starting?
Unfortunately, for Julian Ashton and his tramp friend Wordsworth, they have no choice. Innocently embarking on a search for the missing teenage son of a friend, they become unwittingly drawn into a situation, which threatens their lives and more importantly, the lives of those close to them.
Suddenly, in too deep, there is no option to turn back.
There is something so satisfying with this ending.
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Thnak you, Tannille
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so scary but true! I remember the woods behind my grandmas house was scattered with “dumping grounds”. We would rummage through thinking we would find a treasure! I remember seeing the old appliances!
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They can be really dangerous for children and wildlife. Thanks for your comment
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Now that’s a lesson he won’t forget.
Congratulations on the book
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Thanks, Neil
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Dear Michael,
Spot on dialogue. And I’m so relieved he let his friend out.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle. I nearly left him in there but then thought the punishment would have been so much worse than the crime.
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I thought he was going to leave him there for a moment! Lesson hopefully learned, although the British public seem to have forgotten for the moment. Congrats on the book, looking forward to getting a copy on Kindle when it’s released.
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Thanks, Iain. Some tips round our way are opening under certain restrictions because of how bad flytipping has become. It’s disgusting when you think about it.
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Now the question is… Has the friend understood the message?
Well done, Michael!
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If he doesn’t after that I dare say he’s that thick he’ll struggle to exist for much longer. Thanks Dale
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There is thick and there is thick 😉
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Sometimes people need to learn the hard way. Congratulations on the book – well done.
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Thanks, Sandra
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I hope he learned his lesson…
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He should do after that. Thanks Trent.
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QED nicely done, i’ve never hidden in a fridge like our PM, but don’t think i’ll try it!
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On a serious not, there has been at least one instance of a child dying n a discarded fridge, so no, don’t try it. Thanks for your comment.
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Neat story, Michael.
And you were much more honest about plugging your book than I was!
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Thanks. I just wondered, am I breaking any house rules by plugging my book?
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Nice ending. Enjoyed it.
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Thanks, Anthony
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Realistic dialogue with realistic rationalizations. The idiot earned the lesson.
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Thank you, glad you liked it
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You’re welcome, Michael.
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he deserved what he got. lesson learned. 🙂
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Yes, I hope it is learned, cheers Plaridel
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Nailed it, Mike! Super dialogue, too!
Five out of five leftovers.
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Thank you very much
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I was hoping he’d leave him in there 😉 Nice one!
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In the original I left him in there but had a change of heart and released him, but not after a little suffering. Thanks Draliman
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Fly-tipping a lesson never learned.
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Unfortunately it never is. Thanks James
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Lesson learned? Hopefully so. An excellent take Michael.
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Thanks, Keith
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I sincerely believe he made his point. Good for him! Nicely done, Michael.
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Thanks, Brenda
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You got me! I thought for sure you were going to lock him in and walk away laughing. That would’ve been a slightly darker story though.
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That was the original story actually, but I thought it a bit extreme for the crime in the end. Thanks for commenting
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Harder to get out than he thought! GREAT LESSON LEARNED (I hope). Funny!
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Thanks Nan
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Congrats on the new book, Michael!
Fun and dangerous piece of writing for this tale, certainly an important lesson to learn, but what a way to learn it.
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Yup, hopefully he won’t forget the lesson, thanks Laurie
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Ah, well … something tells me he’d changed his mind and will wait till the morrow to finish the errand … 😉
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After that I’m sure he will wait. Thank you
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🙂
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I like the way the dialogue starts with practicalities, and takes a surprising turn for his friend. A touch of :teach him a lesson ?
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Thank you, I hope it does teach him a lesson
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I expected no release from the fridge… congratulation on the new book
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Thanks, it started off as no release but I thought that a bit harsh.
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Sometimes we need to go to great lengths to prove a post. Good story and post.
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Thank you very much, Geri
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