PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
“Ridiculous, this country. Snow doesn’t stop Canada,” Dower raged.
“But this was a bomb scare,” Higgins sighed.
“Surely they’ve enough experience to deal with these things expediently.”
“Someone wanting a dump couldn’t fit his case in the stall. He asked someone to watch it but she got worried.”
“Did she check the bogs before she went code red?”
“She didn’t know his name and baulked at trying the cubicles.”
Dower scrutinised his companion, “You know this because?”
“It was my luggage.”
“You’re the friggin’ terrorist?”
Hands up, Higgins sniffed, “Problem is, after the controlled explosion, I haven’t any clothes for tonight.”
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
A funny story, Michael. And I was impressed that you managed to get so many words into the title. That gives me an idea for making my stories longer …
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Haha, yes but please don’t report me to you know who. I think I may have got away with it.
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You’re safe, Michael. Titles don’t count in the word count. 😉
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How many words exactly do fit into the WordPress title? Hmmmm…. 😀
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I don’t know but I’m not going to push it.
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Hmm, you say that now but I’m not risking it further 🙂
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Funny story😊
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Thank-you
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Thank-you, very much
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Love when a story packs a punch in the end. Well done!
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Thank-you very much
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Ha, great fun dialogue!
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Thanks Draliman
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Dear Michael,
Higgins doesn’t seem to show much remorse. Well done bit of dark humor.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle, I think he’s too dumb to show remorse
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There’s always a hitch to every plan! 🙂
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Yeah, but he’s just dumb. thanks Iain
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Canadians are extra cautious. Better safe than sorry.
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Too right, thanks for reading
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Really enjoyed the dialogue and the reveal at the end. Excellent!
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Thanks Brenda
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I wonder if his travel insurance will cover this. Very funny story.
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Thanks Margaret, I think not, he’s a very stupid boy.
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A funny and well-written story, Michael. He’ll soon have the only clothes he’ll need. They’ll be provided by the prison. You even mention the word “bomb” today and you’re taken away. It happened to some businessmen in the U.S. some years ago. I heard they lost their jobs even though it was just supposed to be a joke. The authorities don’t consider that funny. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I know Suzanne, but I can understand they don’t want a hundred bomb jokes a day, all of which would have to be investigated. Thanks for reading
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Last line had me laugh out loud. I know the feeling of being left with strangers’ luggage because the person ‘just wants to grab a snack’ and the plane/train/bus are about to depart … What a fun story.
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it
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All’s well that ends (pretty) well. He’s a free man, which is success. Good story.
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Thanks, he is lucky and dim
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You are welcome.
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This sounds like naked truth…
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Thanks Bjorn
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Great dialogue.
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Thank-you very much
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