When the Train has no Brakes






Listening to the record wasn’t as charged as being there, but as a fuse it sparked her memories to explode like fireworks. She could see him vividly now, strutting the stage, enslaving the audience, owning the world. She never loved him so much as in that instance. She dragged her knees up to her chin and crushed a cushion to her breast, sobbing.

“He was so high that night. Why did he need to chase more? He already had it all, why wasn’t that enough?”

She sighed. It was it seemed he’d always known. Ever since, he named the band, Icarus.

Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.

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39 thoughts on “When the Train has no Brakes

  1. That’s a nice example of telling the story indirectly, with a narrator who is not the main character. I found myself quite interested in her. Was she his mother? sister? lover? groupie?
    Good name for the band, too.


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