I did two this week simply because so much goes on in hotels and I couldn’t decide which to post.
PHOTO PROMPT © Marie Gail Stratford
He watched her sleek skin glistening like a chestnut bay in the sun as she came out of the shower. As she dressed he gloried in the memories of the night.
“So just the money now.”
He handed her some notes. “What’s that? It’s £1,200.”
“What? They said £100. I haven’t got £1,200.”
Eyes narrowed, she pulled a paper from her bag, “Look, it says here room 306, all night service, and complete repertoire.”
“But this is 307, I ordered the £100 deal.”
Opening the door she saw white stilettos disappearing down the corridor. “Hey, cheap slut, stop right there!”
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 words story based on a photo prompt. Hosted by Rochelle. Read the other entries here.
Michael Wynn 
White stilettos say it all – no further description required!
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I thought you’d like that touch. 🙂
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Two – and both made me laugh 🙂
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Thanks that’s what they were designed to do. 🙂
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Very “Expensively” put 🙂
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Thanks for reading
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Good one. This case of mistaken identity is going to cost someone.
All my best,
MG
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Thanks for reading
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Great smiles here, love the sleek skin thing. And the last sentence.
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Thanks Mike, I had fun with it.
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Yowza
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Ain’t none of them ‘cheap.’ They all cost, one way or another. 😯
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Oh oh. I hope the ladies don’t see that comment. 🙂 thanks for reading as always.
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That’s being street smart I suppose lol.
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I suspect white shoes couldn’t believe her luck.
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I wouldn’t either 😉
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Oops! Costly mistake. Good story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle.
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hahahahaha…another great laugh!
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Thanks very much. Glad you enjoyed them.
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